Sunday, January 2, 2011

Revised Query Letter

Short and to the point. Feedback desired!

{Insert why I’m send query to this particular agent.}

At eighteen, Hannah Slaughtery hasn’t had time to do much with her life until, while attending an exclusive leadership seminar sponsored by the Institute, she discovers her role in a legacy with a twisted and bloody past. Hannah must decide whether to reject her calling or embrace her future and the consequences that come with her choice. Along the way, she will discover the missing pieces of her past and find that even in the face of death, there’s the chance for a silver lining.

Intended to be the first in a YA fantasy series, The Partizans can also stand alone at 72,000 words.

1 comment:

  1. Hi, I ran into your query because it is actually very similar to mine. I wonder if you ever published this book.